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Brave Sasha!

Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel XD

Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .

Special thanks to :iconyami-pimea: , :iconriverraven: for the critical view on the storyline, world and art and the whole team of English speaking beta readers!!! I also have to thank my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes and hyenas as models and of course all other people on DA who gave me useful tips and critique.


Art, Cheederian species, character and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!
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Given 2013-02-18
The suggester said, "I love the expression of the animals in RoC_Theory of Mind p29 by *BlackMysticA, and the contrast on their body. Also it is a very interesting piece." ( Suggested by Azzedar-san and Featured by jcroxas )
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Hunting-wolf Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014
I really love Sasha already <3
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:iconfeanor-the-dragon:
Feanor-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Congrats on the DD!
Anywho... I'm getting to like this gray-tan guy... he seems to have the whole situation wrapped around his finger.
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ShaozChampion Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
wow this is very deep just from one page. I may need to follow up ^^

Congradulations on your DD ^^
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:iconawsmdragonqueen:
awsmdragonqueen Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Congrats on the DD!

see, obviously you know what you're doing :XD:
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:icondanichi:
Danichi Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
.....LOL! Awesome. This made me laugh.. xD!
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:iconcharmed-ravenclaw:
Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the work you did on the fur!
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Randomnessgirl101 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's lovely. I don't understand the story... but thats because it's the first one I've read. BUT I will go back and start from the begining.
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:iconzal-the-story-teller:
wow these are just gorgeous
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:iconjamminjo:
JamminJo Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Sensational Work of Art :love:

Congratulations on your DD Feature :)
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:iconimmaculatereprobate:
ImmaculateReprobate Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Look how best to cook them perhaps.
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:iconcoolcat007:
coolcat007 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
congrats wit the DD!
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:icondibstarp:
DibstaRP Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This art style is gorgeous!
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cavemanproductions Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
wut just happened?
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:iconfiveonefifteenart:
FiveOneFifteenART Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great details.
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LostGryphin Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Amazing colors and details - congrats on the DD
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BalunStormhands Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Yeah, a DD! Good for you!
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:iconairikanda:
AiriKanda Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Professional
This is seriously amazing! :aww: You truly deserve it, great artwork!
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:iconsatsuchiko:
satsuchiko Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
great artwork!
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:iconwildwolfamp:
WildWolfAMP Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
Awsomeness!
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well deserved DD! :dalove:
Have a nice day! :heart:
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MagicalViper Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great work mate :D!
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SpyroOandOcynder Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful!
Congratz with DD :)
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jamesgunner123 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
.....this art is beyond beautiful and the story intriguing.....you've just found yourself another reader......=3
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TheBlack-Kat Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Student Filmographer
Is it wrong that I'm happy he stood up for the Hyenas, stating they saved him? =)

I'm curious to hear about how he knows Sasha as well.
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BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ha it's good - both cheederians and hyenas are not bad - they are just in conflict and both with good reasons.
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MudstarMord-Sith Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's right! And it seem's daddy can't quite sa no to his daughter's sweet face huh? I'm glad Yves is starting to show some defence for himself too. :) I'm wondering what smart comment that Thaldo is holding off....hahaha!
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ha yeah indeed - Nigras is hard but not cruel as his upcoming son Ferrus. That is a bloody bastard. Anyway Yves and self-defence is something that is a hard combination XD Anyway ya will see hehe
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MudstarMord-Sith Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you know i had a nightmare about Rose and Ferrus? I was reading it like it was a written novel....I think it was my anger that woak me up. x.x it was very bad.
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BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
hopefully Ferrus is not of Rose' generation - he might be dead already. Oh wait Stian kills him. What was the nightmare? I dream about Yves and Sasha now a lot XD
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MudstarMord-Sith Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
oh yeah I know Ferrus will be gone LONG before Rose is ever born. *phew* But you know who dream's are just 'weird'? In the dream I was reading a Cheederian book...like it was a 'written' novel...and He was...doing really terrible horrible things to her *shudders* in the book...I woke up with a start I think it was because i was so angry in the dream I was about to rip the book apart! :P Ferrus putting his paws on My baby? SNARLS! But thankfully that will not happen! ^^;
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Sheranee Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Yeah brave Sasha .... and what a stubborn Nigras. Hope Yves is more or less safe now. Thanks for the comic !
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
NP! Ha Nigras is a 'boss' you don't have to mess with XD
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alvringer Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great story so far and it's really beautifully drawn, I love their fur
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!! Good to hear! Promising for for the next chapters XD
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alvringer Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :D
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Double agent Yves! :la:
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Haha yeah XD
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Duzloo Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
:w00t:
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coolcat007 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
a horse sized mix between...
Can you define horse sized? Horses can be the size of a german shepherd as well as the size of a young elephant.
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
scherpe opmerking overigens ;P
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:iconcoolcat007:
coolcat007 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ik vergeet telkens dat er ook andere mensen op dA zijn die nederlands spreken :P
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
np - ik check ook niet van iedereen waar die vandaan komt - overigens is dat bij mij een beetje misleidend gezien k in Noorwegen woon. Dus dan zou je ergens verstopt uit men DA ID moeten opvissen dat ik Nederlands ben XD
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:iconcoolcat007:
coolcat007 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hoe is het daar in Noorwegen? Koud? :D
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Echt fantastisch! Ik woon aan de rand van Trondheim, op ongeveer 550 km van de poolcircel. Gelukkig houdt de warme golfstroom het nog redelijk behagelijk (-10 tot 0 overdag in de winter en heel veel sneeuw) en daalt de temperatuur hier gelukkig niet tot -40 (zoals 2 uur met de trein verderop).
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:iconcoolcat007:
coolcat007 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
En ben je soms nog aan het schaatsen? Ik wou dat hier weer ijs lag, maar dat duurt nog even.
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
schaatsen op de straat haha - hier loopt men met spijkers onder de schoenen gezien het op schuinaflopende voetpaden anders onmogelijk lopen is. Maar nu dooit het hier flink - jammer. Ik heb zin in een pittige winter met veel sneeuw! Wie weet komt dr ook nog wel ijs in NL - afgelopen jaar toch bijna en elfsteden tocht.
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BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Mannetjes hebben n gemiddelde schofhoogte van 1,8 en vrouwtjes 1,7 m. Gigantisch, maar de metafysische energyflow verklaart een hoop evolutionaire achtergrond.
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aAshleyB Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely marvelous!
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:iconblackmystica:
BlackMysticA Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks!!
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LunozvezdnaiaCoon Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
It is really beautiful :З
I love the details and the lighting)
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