RoC_Theory of Mind p29

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Brave Sasha!

Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel XD

Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .

Special thanks to , for the critical view on the storyline, world and art and the whole team of English speaking beta readers!!! I also have to thank my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes and hyenas as models and of course all other people on DA who gave me useful tips and critique.


Art, Cheederian species, character and story by me. Please don't copy and/or use it without my permission!