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Oh might be crap too - I forgot to send it to the betareaders, so suggestions are welcome!!
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for the critical view on the storyline, world and art and the whole team of English speaking reviewers!!! I also have to thank my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes and hyenas as models and of course all other people on DA who gave me useful tips and critique.
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I have to say I really like the contrast you tend to get in the first panel between Yves and Sasha. It's very eye-catching. The movement was really well pronounced.
In panel 4 I do get a good sensation of him breaking, but largely thanks to the floosh of snow pushed forward in a nice swirl there~ And nice use of the crystal; it really helps as a visible 'center point' as the 'camera angle' is moved around to show different perspectives~ If that makes any sense
Oooh, can't wait to find out more!
And aww, thankyou very much - I don't mind about it being a little late, I really don't - as long as you comment I'd really appreciate it. I'm not sure if the version I linked you was the first WIP or not... I've updated it since, so here's the most recent version if it helps - [link]. (although on my own copy I've changed a few things since posting the WIP, though I still haven't animated his head and tail yet - I wanted to make sure his body and legs were animated first, if that makes sense
And I totally understand about not having a lot of time - I'm studying medicine at university now, and I have to go to hospitals and visit patients in their houses as well as lectures and projects XD! :'D
ah. And that is something that always gets on my nerves about doing Comics/graphic novelish stuff because then you have to be so careful that all these tiney details remain the same frame after frame page after page.
-.- *my head explodes* Not my forte