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RoC Theory of Mind p39

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Character  Yves SiyotèsCharacter  Sasha Kraznjeva

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Yves: still merde.
Sasha: .....russian translation of merde.

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Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel XD

Cheederians are enormous felids; a horse sized mix between an Oriental cat, tiger and Eurasian lynx - see here some refs: [link] , [link] , [link] and , [link] , [link] .

Special thanks to :iconyami-pimea: , :iconriverraven: and :icontigress-phan: for the critical view on the storyline, world and art and the whole team of English speaking reviewers!!! I also have to thank my cats Jayto, Neo and Nintu, the many other cats, tigers, Eurasian lynxes and hyenas as models and of course all other people on DA who gave me useful tips and critique.


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MEJ0NY's avatar
a bit too fast a new event.. i started reading like 10 pages back from this one, and they seem to have JUST escaped her father and they ran 1 mile and are again escaping from something.
/sorry for critique , it's nice to read thou! stands out of the average not properly done comics . like how all bubbles are properly arranged and all /and i do the same mistake with rushing events .