RoS Theory of Mind chapter 2 p50

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YES I reached page 50!! After ehh..1,5 years or something. Way to long...I would recommend to re-read chapter 1 a bit since it has been a pretty long break after the end of chapter 1. The northern hyena's are at least not very happy with the fact that their 'spy' escaped...
The characters featured in this page: Sabi (light brown ), Sartra (black) and Tania (darker brown). Tania is the daughter of this dark brown hyena here blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… and here blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… (the leading one in front). Tania is the leader of a sub-group within the large Chorda-clan, led by Nebu (see here blackmystica.deviantart.com/ar… the black standing one).
Btw - it's sunrise here...

Please help me with the English!  I suck at that and I'm master of typo's which I never see myself

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