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Poor Yves is probably the worst liar I can ever imagine
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Poor Yves is probably the worst liar I can ever imagine
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Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel - especially as it comes to English.
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Another page with beautiful lighting. 
(it's just too nice not to mention 
)
Ah, interesting how in the first panel Sasha is about to say "no", when Yves interrupts her. I wonder if Lanna noticed this at all - and also if she was at all suspicious of them at any point...
I love the close-up of Lanna's face too, her markings are beautiful and I like her features. <3
Also, in the panel on the bottom left, I know there is some perspective involved, but it seems like Lanna is quite tall for a Northern Hyena. Would be interesting to see her next to some other characters we know. (obviously enough though as a female she will be larger than the males, but I think she gives the impression of being quite tall. ^^)
(it's just too nice not to mention )Ah, interesting how in the first panel Sasha is about to say "no", when Yves interrupts her. I wonder if Lanna noticed this at all - and also if she was at all suspicious of them at any point...
I love the close-up of Lanna's face too, her markings are beautiful and I like her features. <3
Also, in the panel on the bottom left, I know there is some perspective involved, but it seems like Lanna is quite tall for a Northern Hyena. Would be interesting to see her next to some other characters we know. (obviously enough though as a female she will be larger than the males, but I think she gives the impression of being quite tall. ^^)