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Some flashbacks
And I kind of like this page...I finally managed to not make a mess of the shadings or the background. I´ve tried a slightly different technique with the BG (drawing everything in one layer).
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Some flashbacks
And I kind of like this page...I finally managed to not make a mess of the shadings or the background. I´ve tried a slightly different technique with the BG (drawing everything in one layer).
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Opinions, critique and tips are welcome!! Let me know what you think about the page as it comes to panels, bubbles, readability of the text, colours, composition, atmosphere, story plot whatever. Help me improving the quality of the novel - especially as it comes to English.
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Art, story, characters, siderian species and northern hyaena species by me.
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Aaaah, filling in some history then! 
I love how you use the little scenes along with Lanna's words to tell the story and fill in what had happened here, and how attitudes have changed between the two species - looking like some groups of Siderians may have been the instigators.
I wonder if those individuals of the Chorda Clan who dared to go the the centre of Zilval Summits were interested in perhaps trying to seize the metacluster for themselves - as you have hinted before that whilst Siderians first discovered how to use the crystals, other species were investigating them too. And I remember the interest the Chorda Clan showed when young Yves touched the crystal...
And haha, like Yves, I'm wondering what Lanna thinks he can do to help - perhaps act as an ambassador between the two species, or I wonder if there is some other reason she has in mind...
I love how you use the little scenes along with Lanna's words to tell the story and fill in what had happened here, and how attitudes have changed between the two species - looking like some groups of Siderians may have been the instigators.
I wonder if those individuals of the Chorda Clan who dared to go the the centre of Zilval Summits were interested in perhaps trying to seize the metacluster for themselves - as you have hinted before that whilst Siderians first discovered how to use the crystals, other species were investigating them too. And I remember the interest the Chorda Clan showed when young Yves touched the crystal...
And haha, like Yves, I'm wondering what Lanna thinks he can do to help - perhaps act as an ambassador between the two species, or I wonder if there is some other reason she has in mind...